Tuesday, February 28, 2012

Held (Part-3)



Filled with happiness and joy, Dan and Lilly came home. The very same night, doctor confirmed that Lilly is pregnant. Cheerfulness filled in the entire house of Dan. That night, Dan gave leave for the servants working at his home. He also gave money to enjoy the night and come back to work, the next day. Dan also went out to bring flowers for Lilly.

 

The house was empty, except for Lilly. Lilly was stretching herself in the bed room, reading a book. She heard a crackle; the sound of the main door getting opened. Must be Dan she thought and started acting as if she were sleeping. The bed room door opened, she didn’t open her eyes. The person who came in, with a gunshot made sure she never opens them again.


When Dan came home he saw that the main door was left open. He immediately ran to the bed room. Lilly was there, with her eyes closed and a red mark on her forehead. It was a head shot. Dan couldn’t bear it


Why now? What kind of father wants his daughter dead?



As he was talking to himself, he saw in the mirror infront of him, a gun behind his head. He immediately bent down, let the shot fly and within this time lap made the person holding the gun fall to the ground. He beat him up. Anon, he tied his hands. Dan then, called the police and handed him over to them. But he refused to answer anything that the police were asking. He was dumb with shock. It was raining outside. He took his rain coat, his hat and started walking into the forest area which is in the outskirts of the village.


 As he was walking, something knocked from outside to enter his mind. He gave it permission


Why did I run always? Why didn’t I try to solve the problems? Why didn’t I fight back? What about the lives lost at the MIRACLE? Why didn’t I stand up as a witness to bring peace to their souls? And now, why didn’t I try to take the help of the lawyers and police to help them, so that they could arrest Lilly’s father? It’s my life. And I should not keep submitting it. Enough has happened. I should not run away like a weakling.



He didn’t waste time. He went back to his home. The police were still present there, collecting evidence. He told them the whole matter; about the eloping, the circumstances that lead to it. And why no other person, other than Lilly’s father could have given the order for the killing. He hired a good lawyer, and also made the files of the fire accident at the MIRACLE - Home for the destitute to be reopened.


After the hearings, Lilly’s father was arrested and sentenced to jail for fifteen years. The superintendent’s wife also got arrested. They arrested the Superintendent too, for the perjury of misguiding the law about the cause of fire.


Dan never married another woman. He stayed in the village for the rest of his life, making the people to know the rights and fight back, if injustice had been caused to them. A TV reporter once asked him,


“Why didn’t you try to kill the people who did injustice to you? “


“Let me tell you one thing first, I don’t hate anyone so much as to kill him; even the person, who murdered my wife. There may be several reasons why a person does any crime or injustice. He may be desperate of something. The things that may appear right to him may appear wrong to us. But looking in his perspective may be sometimes he is right. A person who steals because he is hungry is not a robber. Truthfully, no one in this world is completely righteous. A criminal may not stay as criminal for his whole life. May be they will do some jail time, and then, may be they will change. Who knows? But, not giving them a second chance makes us no different from the butchers of mankind. I don’t want to be like that. Also, I am helping people to get justice, so that others could get inspired from me and do the same”


“Do you think all these activities are heroic for people to get inspired?”


 “Yeah, sure”


“But a hero should at least kill a dozen men”


“Well, this is a new form of heroism and I am the new age Held(Dutch)”

Held (Part-3)

Story :
Filled with happiness and joy, Dan and Lilly came home. The very same night, doctor confirmed that Lilly is pregnant. Cheerfulness filled in the entire house of Dan. That night, Dan gave leave for the servants working at his home. He also gave money to enjoy the night and come back to work, the next day. Dan also went out to bring flowers for Lilly.

The house was empty, except for Lilly. Lilly was stretching herself in the bed room, reading a book. She heard a crackle; the sound of the main door getting opened. Must be Dan she thought and started acting as if she were sleeping. The bed room door opened, she didn’t open her eyes. The person who came in, with a gunshot made sure she never opens them again.

When Dan came home he saw that the main door was left open. He immediately ran to the bed room. Lilly was there, with her eyes closed and a red mark on her forehead. It was a head shot. Dan couldn’t bear it

Why now? What kind of father wants his daughter dead?

As he was talking to himself, he saw in the mirror infront of him, a gun behind his head. He immediately bent down, let the shot fly and within this time lap made the person holding the gun fall to the ground. He beat him up. Anon, he tied his hands. Dan then, called the police and handed him over to them. But he refused to answer anything that the police were asking. He was dumb with shock. It was raining outside. He took his rain coat, his hat and started walking into the forest area which is in the outskirts of the village.

 As he was walking, something knocked from outside to enter his mind. He gave it permission

Why did I run always? Why didn’t I try to solve the problems? Why didn’t I fight back? What about the lives lost at the MIRACLE? Why didn’t I stand up as a witness to bring peace to their souls? And now, why didn’t I try to take the help of the lawyers and police to help them, so that they could arrest Lilly’s father? It’s my life. And I should not keep submitting it. Enough has happened. I should not run away like a weakling.

He didn’t waste time. He went back to his home. The police were still present there, collecting evidence. He told them the whole matter; about the eloping, the circumstances that lead to it. And why no other person, other than Lilly’s father could have given the order for the killing. He hired a good lawyer, and also made the files of the fire accident at the MIRACLE - Home for the destitute to be reopened.
After the hearings, Lilly’s father was arrested and sentenced to jail for fifteen years. The superintendent’s wife also got arrested. They arrested the Superintendent too, for the perjury of misguiding the law about the cause of fire.

Dan never married another woman. He stayed in the village for the rest of his life, making the people to know the rights and fight back, if injustice had been caused to them. A TV reporter once asked him,

“Why didn’t you try to kill the people who did injustice to you? “
“Let me tell you one thing first, I don’t hate anyone so much as to kill him; even the person, who murdered my wife. There may be several reasons why a person does any crime or injustice. He may be desperate of something. The things that may appear right to him may appear wrong to us. But looking in his perspective may be sometimes he is right. A person who steals because he is hungry is not a robber. Truthfully, no one in this world is completely righteous. A criminal may not stay as criminal for his whole life. May be they will do some jail time, and then, may be they will change. Who knows? But, not giving them a second chance makes us no different from the butchers of mankind. I don’t want to be like that. Also, I am helping people to get justice, so that others could get inspired from me and do the same”
“Do you think all these activities are heroic for people to get inspired?”
 “Yeah, sure”
“But a hero should at least kill a dozen men”

“Well, this is a new form of heroism and I am the new age Held(Dutch)”

Saturday, February 25, 2012

Held (Part-2)

Before leaving town, Dan took Lilly to a hospital and the wounds were soothed with ointments and bandages. Then on the same night, he left the town by train.

The train was mostly empty. When the train started moving, Dan felt like they were the only ones in the compartment. Dan sat near the window and he did not let Lilly sit; instead, he let her sleep on his lap. As the train wheels jerked into faster motion, he caught her shoulder for the fear that she might roll down. Holding her, he was looking outside, into the darkness.

Lilly - "Dan"
Dan - "Yes, darling"
Lilly - "Is it because of the wounds that you are not looking at me ?"
Dan - "No, my dear"
Lilly - "Then why are you looking outside ?"
Dan - "Go to sleep"
Lilly - "You didn't answer my question. Tell me why ?"
Dan looking into Lilly's eyes - "I was looking outside so that you would go to sleep, and forget the pain being caused by your wounds"

Dan with a smile - "Any girl wouldn't try to torture her boyfriend on the first day of eloping"
Lilly smiling- "It will always be like this, not just today"
Dan - "Yeah, what ever it is, that goes into each one of our minds about other, it should be expressed and clarified"
Lilly beaming with joy - "Rather than fuming inside oneself, and getting filled with prejudices"

Anon, Dan kissed her on the fore head. Lilly looking at Dan, slowly went to sleep. Dan also slept after some time, sitting. Morning came, and both opened eyes at the same time. They did not leave the train, but travelled one more day, so that they would get very far away from Lilly's father. On the next day, they got down and went into a village, where the train stopped. Dan wouldn't know it, but it's the same village where he was initially taken from. With the money he had, he took a house for rent and at the back part of that house, started an Electrical shop. The village situation was same as when Dan's uncle took him away, during his childhood.

The villagers had to go ten miles to another city, if one of their motors stops working, paying a lot more than what is required to pay had they lived in cities. Also, if there is a power cut due to some transformer problem, they would have to wait for a minimum of five days, for the power to be restored. With Dan's arrival, the situation changed. With his dexterity, he used to handle all those problems. Also, Dan used to take very less amounts of money, and if one of the farmers couldn't pay the amount, he used to postpone the payment to a later date. With in a few months, everyone in the city knew Dan, and Dan also trained some of the village youth so that they would share his work. Also, till Lilly's wounds got healed, Dan used to do all the house hold chores. After one and half year, Lilly was completely fine doing the house hold chores herself, and Dan bought the house where he was staying for rent.

The village head observed as all the good things started happening in the village. One fine day, he invited Dan for a Luncheon along with Lilly.

Head - "Dan, I am really happy for you to be here"
Dan - "oh ! It's my pleasure"
Head - "Without you, this village would not have been what it is, today. Very thank you"
Dan - "I should thank you first and your villagers. Even though I am an outsider, you gave me a place to stay, and trusted me in business"
Head - "Just a bit curious, if it bothers you, you needn't tell me. So, where are you from ? Who are your parents ?"
Dan - "No problem. There is nothing to hide for me among the people like you. I don't know about my parents, but as far as I remember, I was left at the home for the destitute, where the superintendent there raised me for some time"
The Head gasped - "Is it MIRACLE - Home for the destitute ? I mean, the place where you were left ?"
Dan - "Yes, it is"
Head - "And you left it when you were 16 years old ?"
Dan - "How do you"

Dan did not complete the question, while the Head's eyes were filled with tears

Head - "You belong to this village. The one who left you there was your uncle. After the death of your parents, he promised to provide you with good education. Taking you along with  all the property of your parents, he left the city. We inquired about you a lot of times sending letters and some times even people, but he gave only absurd replies. There is some land in the village that belonged to your father, but hadn't been sold. The documents of that land were with your uncle. One day he came to the village, and started showing that land to some corporate guy. We caught him, and inquired about you. When he didn't give a commendable answer, we beat him up; He then, revealed that he left you at MIRACLE. Then, we handed him over to the police. We talked with the superintendent of MIRACLE and anon searched for you, but couldn't get you.  It's a miracle that we found you now"
Dan, being filled with joy, taking huge breaths looked at Lilly and then at the Village head's face
Dan - "Finally, I know where I am from, I will be telling my children about their grand parents"

On the other side, Lilly's father got the location of Dan and Lilly. He gave orders for an assassin to kill both of them

Friday, February 24, 2012

Held (Part-2)

Story :
Before leaving town, Dan took Lilly to a hospital and the wounds were soothed with ointments and bandages. Then on the same night, he left the town by train.

The train was mostly empty. When the train started moving, Dan felt like they were the only ones in the compartment. Dan sat near the window and he did not let Lilly sit; But let her sleep on his lap. As the train wheels jerked into faster motion, he caught her shoulder for the fear that she might roll down. Holding her, he was looking outside, into the darkness.

Lilly - "Dan"
Dan - "Yes, darling"
Lilly - "Is it because of the wounds that you are not looking at me ?"
Dan - "No, my dear"
Lilly - "Then why are you looking outside ?"
Dan - "Go to sleep"
Lilly - "You didn't answer my question. Tell me why ?"
Dan looking into Lilly's eyes - "I was looking outside so that you would go to sleep, and forget the pain being caused by your wounds"

Dan with a smile - "Any girl wouldn't try to torture her boyfriend on the first day of eloping"
Lilly smiling- "It will always be like this, not just today"
Dan - "Yeah, what ever it is, that goes into each one of our minds about other, it should be expressed and clarified"
Lilly beaming with joy - "Rather than fuming inside oneself, and getting filled with prejudices"

Anon, Dan kissed her on the fore head. Lilly looking at Dan, slowly went to sleep. Dan also slept after some time, sitting. Morning came, and both opened eyes at the same time. They did not leave the train, but travelled one more day, so that they would get very far away from Lilly's father. On the next day, they got down and went into a village, where the train stopped. Dan wouldn't know it, but it's the same village where he was initially taken from. With the money he had, he took a house for rent and at the back part of that house, started an Electrical shop. The village situation was same as when Dan's uncle took him away, during his childhood.

The villagers had to go ten miles to another city, if one of their motors stops working, paying a lot more than what is required to pay had they lived in cities. Also, if there is a power cut due to some transformer problem, they would have to wait for a minimum of five days, for the power to be restored. With Dan's arrival, the situation changed. With his dexterity, he used to handle all those problems. Also, Dan used to take very less amounts of money, and if one of the farmers couldn't pay the amount, he used to postpone the payment to a later date. With in a few months, everyone in the city knew Dan, and Dan also trained some of the village youth so that they would share his work. Also, till Lilly's wounds got healed, Dan used to do all the house hold chores. After one and half year, Lilly was completely fine doing the house hold chores herself, and Dan bought the house where he was staying for rent.

The village head observed as all the good things started happening in the village. One fine day, he invited Dan for a Luncheon along with Lilly.

Head - "Dan, I am really happy for you to be here"
Dan - "oh ! It's my pleasure"
Head - "Without you, this village would not have been what it is, today. Very thank you"
Dan - "I should thank you first and your villagers. Even though I am an outsider, you gave me a place to stay, and trusted me in business"
Head - "Just a bit curious, if it bothers you, you needn't tell me. So, where are you from ? Who are your parents ?"
Dan - "No problem. There is nothing to hide for me among the people like you. I don't know about my parents, but as far as I remember, I was left at the home for the destitute, where the superintendent there raised me for some time"
The Head gasped - "Is it MIRACLE - Home for the destitute ? I mean, the place where you were left ?"
Dan - "Yes, it is"
Head - "And you left it when you were 16 years old ?"
Dan - "How do you"

Dan did not complete the question, while the Head's eyes were filled with tears

Head - "You belong to this village. The one who left you there was your uncle. After the death of your parents, he promised to provide you with good education. Taking you along with  all the property of your parents, he left the city. We inquired about you a lot of times sending letters and some times even people, but he gave only absurd replies. There is some land in the village that belonged to your father, but hadn't been sold. The documents of that land were with your uncle. One day he came to the village, and started showing that land to some corporate guy. We caught him, and inquired about you. When he didn't give a commendable answer, we beat him up; He then, revealed that he left you at MIRACLE. Then, we handed him over to the police. We talked with the superintendent of MIRACLE and anon searched for you, but couldn't get you.  It's a miracle that we found you now"
Dan, being filled with joy, taking huge breaths looked at Lilly and then at the Village head's face
Dan - "Finally, I know where I am from, I will be telling my children about their grand parents"

On the other side, Lilly's father came to know about the location of Dan and Lilly. He gave orders to an assassin to kill both of them.

Wednesday, February 8, 2012

Held (Part-1)

Before word : This is one of the fastest screenplays I have written, so don't even think of skipping a line (You may miss a month or year doing so). Also, this story will be simultaneously published at my other blog ( http://dileepwrites.wordpress.com )


Story :
A man was walking on a rainy day in a forest. He was six foot tall with an angular face and athletic physique. He was walking with clenched fists thumping the ground with his boots. He wore a rain coat that covered his body entirely and an Indiana Jones hat. As he was walking listening to the sound of rain drops he remembered how unlucky his life was since beginning.

Dan was the only child for his parents. His father was a well known landlord in the village. His parents, used to tell him, and also the whole village, that Dan will study in a city to become a big engineer. They died when he was eight years old, leaving him alone. His uncle, a long distant relative came to take care of him. He behaved like a good man with the villagers and a villager on one occasion revealed the dream of Dan’s parents for him. So, on one fine day, he assembled all villagers and told them, that he is going to sell all the property of Dan’s parents, take him to a city and make him study there using that money. Some villagers came forward to buy the property, some even took it for a higher cost than the original rate, thinking that it would do good to a fatherless boy. Dan’s uncle, carefully planning all the things, bid Vaarwel to the villagers. Fearing that the villagers might track him, he took Dan to another state. Leaving him at the door step of home for  the destitutes; telling that he would return in a minute, he disappeared. Dan, after waiting a long time there, went inside. The superintendent of that home, after asking Dan of his whereabouts and not reaching a conclusion, took him inside, fed him and made him work like the rest of the children.

There, Dan used to do all the work that is assigned to him without complaining. His dexterity in doing the tasks and his impeccable nature helped him gain the confidence of the superintendent. The superintendent, started sending him to a near by school. Dan used to study very hard and after completing his school work, used to continue his other works at the home just like the rest of the children. The superintendent’s wife is a very greedy woman and she didn’t like her husband, doing social service working at a lesser wage at that aisle. After many unsuccessful attempts to change the mind of her husband, she once went to hostel, switched on the gas, closed it’s doors and started fire. The screams of the children inside the home couldn’t move her, neither the passers by on the streets. Even though it happened in broad day light, everyone is busy, watching their wrists and moving stead fast. Neither the superintendent nor Dan were present in the home at that time. When Dan came from school that evening, he saw the home incinerated. He went to the superintendent’s home, but his wife wouldn’t let him inside, nor let her husband see him. She scolded him – “You looted our wealth for your schooling”. Dan not withstanding her words, went far away from that place to another city. He is now sixteen years old.

He worked for a Electrician in that city. The electrician was an old man with no children. He let Dan, stay with him in his house. After two years, the electrician became sick and started staying at home. Dan used to care of the shop and also, the old man when he went home. After an year the old man died leaving him the shop. Dan, who is good at making friends, made the road side children his friends and made them learn the work. Later they started working with him. He worked very hard to sustain himself among the already established electricians. His hardwork didn’t go waste. His diligence gained many new customers in the next five years, than did the old man in his entire life. He is now twenty four years old. His rep in that place increased and every one in that city respected him, since they witnessed his raise which is enigmatic to see in real life.

One fine morning, as he was checking the accounts in his shop, a young lady came in. Dan’s pulse rose as he watched her striding from the threshold towards him. She came near and told him that there is some problem with the water motor at their home and requested him to send some one. Dan telling her that he handled problems of that kind himself, went to her home and made it right. Later on they used to greet each other when ever they came across. When ever there is a problem with in the locality of that lady, Dan used to personally go and look after the problem. Soon they became good friends and started exchanging gifts. One day Dan took her to a candle light dinner and proposed her there. She let him put the ring to her hand. After coming home, her dad inquired about the ring. She told her dad, about her love. Her father became furious, since Dan didn’t even go to college while his daughter went to Business school. He scolded her and told her to forget him. When Lilly refused to do so, he beat her like a beast. He kept her in a room and locked it. He didn’t let anyone inside, not even her mom and also any food till she apologizes to him. Still sore with wounds, she some how escaped and went to Dan. Dan, after seeing her in that situation and also knowing the money power of Lilly’s father, abandoned his shop, his home and all the intangible assets he gained and left the city with the money he saved till then.

Friday, February 3, 2012

A Small Message

I originally used to write stories in another blog. Stopped writing at the nigh of 2010 due to some unforeseen circumstances. I promised to go back from the January of 2012. In order to do rehearsals before writing the stories there, I used this blog. Will try to update this one also, when time permits. But for now, go to my original blog, which I will update once in a week

http://dileepwrites.wordpress.com/

Update : 28/1/2012
People like this story, 2012 which I wrote, so I made it an Amazon E-book, so that it could reach to a wide set of book nerds. Follow the below link for the book



Update : 03/2/2012
The first two parts of the story will be presented here, in order for people to make a decision to buy the book.

Update : 30/11/2014
Well the book is a huge flop. I will be pulling it down. In this blog itself, you can read all the parts of the "2012" story.

Happy reading..

Announcing 2021

The follow up to the Chapter-1, 2012, will be 2021. The main theme of the story is undisclosed.

Releasing on Dooms day: 21/12/2012

If you haven't read the Chapter-1 aka 2012, get it here